Shining sun
The shining sun is here, time
To do anything till the sun goes
Down. going to the beech till
Diner and then going to the deriy
For poding. Then the next morning
Sleeping into morning tea time no
Rain no thunder gast sun.
You have a lot of misspelt words
ReplyDeleteBut it is a good poem
ReplyDeletegood poem but spelling errors but what you mean before you post it cheek it and i like the sun poem.
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