To day will be the day
Today will be the day that I will get the news of my life but I do not no.
Hi my name is Jeremy I have a rear devises called calla calla it kills
sometimes here comes my doctor he
Ses that I will only have two days to live they let me out of the
Hospital when I get home I make a list of all of the
Thing that I have wanted to do since I was a kid
So here it is jumping from a 100 m jumping
Board, skydiving and wall I can't think of any more
So now it's off to the the airport for sky diving
I Am at the airport getting into my skydiving
Gere for some reason I Am not nervous
OK we are at jump height I jump
Out for some reason I pill my
para shot start a way
I landed perfect
OK so now oft to
The local aquatic
Center i am at the top
Of the diving board looking
Down I jumped of the board I lamed
In A belly flop it hurts when I am out of the pool
It hits me that I Am going to die to night I drive to the
Hospital and that is the last thing I can remember …..
you have not put full stops but I like your story
ReplyDeleteyou have not put full stops but I like your story
ReplyDeleteI like the story Flynn and that's a good shape for the story but like Jackson said Fullstops...
ReplyDeleteI like the story Flynn i think you need to go back over it and fix the spelling mistakes and i also like how you put ... at the end of the story
ReplyDeletecool work but are thosec fullstops at the end pease tell me
ReplyDeleteI really like your story
ReplyDeleteI really like your story
ReplyDeleteGood story sad but good and interesting next time use a dictionary to help you with your spelling.I like the way you masde it short but very interesting
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